
Layout: [ 23/25 ]
A dark self designed layout with a nice Madonna image .I like the way your links distinguish themselves at the bottom of the image ..
Content: [ 30/60 ]
You wrote that you're addicted to internet . Well if you were , youd have been updating ure diary more often . Entries are short , devoid of insight and life besides the lyrics part which i think is really innovtive . Kylie you need to live . Either that or dont bother about your diary even . Nothing makes you happy . This is something that youve mentioned a lot of times in your diary . MAke it a point to sign some particular diaries everyday . This way you'll make new acquaintances and freshen up . Request a review at my site and ill give you a tight lil shake .
Errors: [ 5/5 ]
Zilch . Good work kylie
Contact: [ 1/2 ]
Email, guestbook . Get another form of contact up and running girl. Im being nice here because we're both Angelina Jolie fans :)
Bonus: [ 1/2 ]
Photography link , Site link ,
Word of advice:
Get me a cast page or a bio page.I wanna know more about you besides the fact that ure good with lyrics .. :)
U wrote well :
"I think my dreams are fascinating. I love those dreams that almost seem real. Not that they're realistic, but... vivid, and like watching a movie."
Will I be coming back? [ 8/8 ]
I will definately come back to see if you've started to flow or not and you better not disappoint me !
Bonus: [ 12 ] Because i want you to really try this time .
Total: [ 80/100 ]
Reviewed by: Silent Spring
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.