viks
2003-01-12 @ 5:23 a.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

let it snow, let it snow, let it snow!


Layout: [25/25]

This layout by lis design is very well laid out. A cute picture of snow covered branches. Very pleasing to the eye, and I love the conservative colors. Navigation is simple, all on the right side.

Content: [50/60]

You’re always smiling and laughing, in almost every one of your entries, you come across as a very optimistic person… “You’re known by the company you keep,” and I’d love for you to keep me company , hehe. You seem really genuine, and down-to-earth. Your writing isn’t anything spectacular, but I like that you keep it simple. However, I’m interested in knowing how you feel without the spotlight. It seems as though there’s a sugar coating over some of your writing, like you’re afraid to say everything you wanted to say in fear of hurting someone’s feelings… or letting them know yours. Be open, and try not to worry about what everyone else will think* All in all your diary was a good read.

Errors: [2/5]

Punctuation, punctuation, punctuation! It’s a must. Along with Grammar and capitalization. Other than that, everything was working and looked fine.

Contact: [2/2]

G-book, e-mail, and tag-board.

Bonus: [7]
links, informing section on M.E, birthday’s (mines may 15), dreams, 101 things, goals, life story, and poetry.

Word of advice:

Be more creative with your choice of words… and punctuate!

Fave. Quote:

”there is always something to be glad about”

Best entries:

along with that quotes entry here

Additional comments:

You’re a very strong person, whether you realize this or not, where there is darkness you see that ray of light. You’re a very admirable soul, and it shows in every entry of your writing… even when “Kat” writes for you.

Will I be coming back? [7/8]

Yes, you made me very curious to see how you’d handle tomorrow, and every day after.

Total: [92/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer



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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.

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