
Layout: [ 21/25 ]
This is a rather attractive layout (designed by Kym) featuring celestial images from Full Moon Graphics. The background is black, the entry is in the center and the links are lined up neatly on the right. Overall, I think it’s lovely. My only complaint is that you chose to use the generic guest map link rather than making your own as you did with all the other ones. Also, you have no previous/next links.. That is rather irritating.
Content: [ 51/60 ]
You tend to write rather short entries which generally revolve around day to day things. Normally, this would irritate me, but in your case, it isn’t necessarily a bad thing since you put emotion and personality into them which always draws readers in. I would prefer if you wrote some longer, more in-depth ones though. About things like childhood memories and what reminds you of them, friends, ex, currents, whatever.. Just something to give us a better idea of who you are.. Which is something I don’t think the reader really has at this point.
Errors: [ 3/5 ]
There are a few spelling/grammatical errors, and more than a few dead links/images on your quiz pages.
Contact: [ 2/2 ]
Email, guestbook, tag board..
Bonus: [ 6 ]
Extras, facts, crew, links, quizzes, rings, and so much more..
Word of advice:
You might want to consider going through your quiz pages from time to time and deleting the dead ones. Also, there‘s a rather annoying little pop up add that comes up every time you open a new page, if there‘s any way of getting rid of that, it would be much appreciated.
Fave. Quotes:
Nothing really stood out..
Best entries:
Nothing really stood out..
Will I be coming back? [ 5/8 ]
I might, it really depends on how much free time I have.
Total: [ 88/100 ]
Reviewed by: Carmela
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.