boyafterboy
2003-01-09 @ 12:55 a.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

those three dirty words


Layout: [24/25]

Your layout is exceptional, very simple, but very ‘cute’. I took a point off because I thought it was just a little too simple and I have to say I’m not the biggest fan of pink, but the picture fixed all that for me. The picture itself compliments your writing, and gave me a sense of how you feel most of the time. And you designed it yourself?! Go you!

Content: [60/60]

Your entries sparked my imagination, when reading your diary I could almost feel myself feeling what you were feeling. You write with such intense passion! I love it!

Errors: [4/5]

You don’t capitalize on some entries, but I think you don’t on purpose, but still, it is an error.

Contact: [ 2/2]

Guestbook, notes, and email, you’ve got it all!

Bonus: [1]

You give props to other dland diaries you like.

Word of advice:

Maybe hover your links so that we know exactly what they are and where they lead?

Fave. Quote:

“even god can't change the past.”

Best entries:

I was particularly fond of this one! I related with the whole entry.

Additional comments:

I loved your writing style and you were able to grasp my entire imagination, good job!

Will I be coming back? [8/8]

Most definitely!

Total: [99/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer


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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.

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