Layout: [ 23/25 ]

This is a self designed layout done in gray, featuring a rather nice picture of Orlando Bloom on the left, next to a text box with the entry in the center and the links in a neat row along the right. Overall, I really like your layout. And not just because Bloom is definitely nice to look at. The colors you use are great and the fact that you broke the navigation up the way you did rocks. Great job!

Content: [ 50/60 ]

You seem to spend quite a bit of time in front of the computer.. Or maybe you just enjoy talking about other people with diaries. Either way, a lot of time is spend making lists of things, mentioning conversations with others, etc. This isn’t necessarily a bad things since you’re mentioning people we could go find out about which is kind of neat.. But it does take away from the reader getting to know you. After reading so many of your entries I really don’t feel like I have any sort of clear picture of who you are. I know who your friends are, what movies/bands, etc you like.. but not you. Not how you feel about things. What makes you hurt, what makes you happy..

Errors: [ 5/5 ]

Not a single one in sight..

Contact: [ 2/2 ]

Guestbook, email, notes..

Bonus: [ 3 ]

Fans, links, extra..

Word of advice:

If you wrote more personal entries from time to time, I think the reader might feel more of a connection to you..

Fave. Quotes:

Nothing really grabbed my attention..

Best entries:

Your random facts entry is great.. Maybe because we have some things in common. My dad died when I was seven and I also cried during the Lion King also. When he lost his dad.. Because I could relate so well, you know? Also, I really liked your abc‘s of suck and cool. It‘s a cute idea.

Will I be coming back? [ 4/8 ]

I might, but I doubt it. I just don‘t feel like you‘re open enough..

Total: [ 87/100 ]

Reviewed by: Carmela