
crazyfeeb- clever title to the third power
Layout: [15/25]
I'm not fond of the layout. It's weird, but I guess it works for your style of writing.
Content: [40/60]
You started out great, but then it got boring. You have potential, you just need to know what to do with it. I'm sure if more of your entries were like this I'd love it.
Errors: [5/5]
None that I can see.
Contact:[2/2]
It's all there.
Bonus: [3]
Wow, you have a band. How cool!
Favorite Quote:
"But mostly God help me."
Best Entries:
I didn't find any.
Additioinal Comments:
You have some interesing stuff to say.
Will I Be Coming Back: [2/8]
Not really. The layout kinda creeps me out.
Total:67/100
Reviewed by:Cindi
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.