crazykt
2003-01-04 @ 3:21 p.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

...how can you say you want me stay when all you ever do is go?...

Layout: [ 22/25 ]

When I first went to your diary thier was a trash layout, it changed! This one is cute too, its done by Kitty-rash designs, but I just have a few suggestions. First, I don't think you should have the review links on top of your pic (jeez, what am i saying? your promoting my site, lol) because it kind of clutters up the total affect. And, the "canadian" doll and site meter might fit better on the bottom of the layout. These are just my opinions though. I like the font by the way.

Content: [ 50/60 ]

Hmmm...your entries were either hilarious, boring, sad, or happy. So, I could tell just by that you have many moods and it shows in your entrys. I could relate to a lot of stuff you talked about, although sometimes your writing can get tedious and flighty-gossip like, such as when you wrote, "everyone says Aaron likes me.(no not aaron webb..hes a freak!) but i cant go out with him because bridget broke his heart last year and he really hasnt gotten over it. yes i have to be the only one in school who HATES bridget. she hates me." although you did also have some heart felt entries such as this and this . Something that made me chuckle while reading was this line, "YOU KNOW WHAT MADE ME SO EFFIN MAD TODAY?? DO YOU??" Because I didn't know that people actually wrote out the word "effin". I dont know why this amused me...maybe I need to get out more.

Errors: [ 5/5 ]

none really.

Contact: [ 2/2 ]

email, notes, gbook.

Bonus: [ 4 ]

About me page, surveys, rings, fave. entries.

Word of advice:

Just the few layout complaints and maybe try to incorporate some insightful emotions in your writing occasionally.

Fave. Quotes:

Probably the EFFIN one mentioned earlier. Hehe.

Best entries:

I liked this one and this

Will I be coming back? [ 5/8 ]

I will if I am not too busy! Check up on things.

Total: [ 88/100 ]

Reviewed by: Teensy



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