dont-speak
2003-02-02 @ 6:23 p.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

[...rock out of this world...]

Layout: [ 23/25 ]

This is a U-T design which is dark and moody glam. Although I would not pick this layout myself, it goes quite well with your diary, and thats whats really important, right? I don't actually get the picture, but I may just be out of the loop. Over all, I think it's a nice choice with your diary. Especially the font.

Content: [ 60/60 ]

Your diary is ripe with feeling. I know that a lot of people get either bored with depressive/dark entries or really relate/enjoy them. I happen to get sucked into them. Your's has this endearing honesty that makes you want to cry right along with you. I was especially aghast at the entry about your parents not believing in your poetry. That made me feel so bad. When I learned you were only thirteen, my awe increased. To be going through the stuff you are, so young! Not to mention, when I was thirteen I couldn't write nearly as well. Over all I was very delighted in the eloquence of yur diary. Good job!

Errors: [ 4/5 ]

I found a few typos, nothing too bad.

Contact: [ 2/2 ]

Aim.

Bonus: [ 2 ]

lyrics, links.

Word of advice:

The only thing I could say is for you to get your butt back here and keep using your diary. That of course, is a purely selfish request, because I want to read more. But, I thought I would throw it out there anyway.

Fave. Quotes:

"I... I don't know. I just know that I love her."

"You're making a mistake."

"Then it's my mistake to be made."”

Best entries:

I love this 50 one. And this and this.

Will I be coming back? [ 7/8 ]

Well, I would and add you to my faves. and all that, but your gone...

Total: [ 98/100 ]

Reviewed by: Teensy



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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.

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