
Layout: [ 23/25 ]
This is a U-T design which is dark and moody glam. Although I would not pick this layout myself, it goes quite well with your diary, and thats whats really important, right? I don't actually get the picture, but I may just be out of the loop. Over all, I think it's a nice choice with your diary. Especially the font.
Content: [ 60/60 ]
Your diary is ripe with feeling. I know that a lot of people get either bored with depressive/dark entries or really relate/enjoy them. I happen to get sucked into them. Your's has this endearing honesty that makes you want to cry right along with you. I was especially aghast at the entry about your parents not believing in your poetry. That made me feel so bad. When I learned you were only thirteen, my awe increased. To be going through the stuff you are, so young! Not to mention, when I was thirteen I couldn't write nearly as well. Over all I was very delighted in the eloquence of yur diary. Good job!
Errors: [ 4/5 ]
I found a few typos, nothing too bad.
Contact: [ 2/2 ]
Aim.
Bonus: [ 2 ]
lyrics, links.
Word of advice:
The only thing I could say is for you to get your butt back here and keep using your diary. That of course, is a purely selfish request, because I want to read more. But, I thought I would throw it out there anyway.
Fave. Quotes:
"I... I don't know. I just know that I love her."
"You're making a mistake."
"Then it's my mistake to be made."”
Best entries:
I love this 50 one. And this and this.
Will I be coming back? [ 7/8 ]
Well, I would and add you to my faves. and all that, but your gone...
Total: [ 98/100 ]
Reviewed by: Teensy
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.