
Layout: [20/25]
The layout was designed here I kinda like it cuz it has a girl upside down holding a tray with some drinks. The background is a dark red with white or grey text colors. The text is too small to tell, which I don't like. And the navigator is all the way at the bottom. I do like how she has "sober" and "drunk" for her "next" and "previous" links. And the links color are just too dark for me and then turn to a dark grey when you hover them then black when you click them.
Content: [45/60]
I really couldn't follow much in this diary, but what I got out of it (and if I'm wrong, plz forgive me) that it's two girls who are best friends (and lovers?) but one of them seems to have a boyfriend. I love how Slyvia calls her period "Tony" maybe I should give mine a name! lol...They write good, but the content didn't agree with me. Guess I wasn't interested! They basically talk about their day or whatever they have on their minds!
Errors [4/5]
I did find a few spelling mistakes though.
Contact: [2/2]
notes, email, guestbook
Bonus: [3]
some links, but I'm giving her extra points for the creative names she's used for her links.
Word of Advice:
None.
Fave Quote:
"I no longer want to feel like an idiot, Im sure as not hell one. But I appear as one."
"Everythings driving me crazy. Like when the fact people don't capitalize when they're typing, drives me naturally crazy."
Best Entries:
None.
Additional Comments:
Good luck with everything girl! Sorry about that crappy job I did last night. I did re-read the same entries, and although I still didn't like them, I'm sure someone else will enjoy them. I was in a pissed off mood last night and should've have taken it out on your diary.
Will I come back?: [2/8]
Nope.
Total: 76/100
Reviewed by: Nancy
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.