
Layout: [ 23/25 ]
This is a very blue self designed layout with a lovely almost ethereal looking background. The links are centered at the top directly over a text box with your entry inside. Your design is tasteful and beautiful without being overwhelming and I find it entirely delightful. I would however, suggest that you move your next/previous links to the bottom of your entry and add a link to your profile or perhaps a bio page? Also, the links on your older page would be much easier to make out if you put them in a text box like the one on your main page.
Content: [ 51/60 ]
Your diary seems to be comprised of rather sort introspective entries. You seem honest and able to know yourself (and with all the aspects of your personality) quite well. That’s admirable, and so is your writing style which flows well and is worded wonderfully. I did however notice that although you do send time writing about things such as your view on self centered people, or how we never truly get over people you spend almost no time talking about your life. It brings about a strange fusion of frankness and ambiguity.. and you know, I’m not quite sure whether that combination is highly attractive in a diary or if it brings about a short period of intrigue followed closely by exasperation and tedium.
Errors: [ 5/5 ]
Not so much as a misspelled word.
Contact: [ 2/2 ]
Notes, email, guestbook, aim..
Bonus: [ 2 ]
Add, reviews..
Word of advice:
I really would like to see a cast page or a bio page.
Fave. Quotes:
“I presume that our gut feeling's are our true selves shining through at one moment in time.”
“I'm in love with a person I have formed in my brain. Not only will this save me from future heart breaks, I will be in a mental hospital if I attempt to explain this to someone.”
Best entries:
None that stood out.
Will I be coming back? [ 7/8 ]
I think I will, if only to figure out what I spoke of under the ‘content‘ section.
Total: [ 90/100 ]
Reviewed by: Carmela
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.