ema-g
2003-01-27 @ 12:36 a.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

You laugh at me because I'm different, I laugh because you're all the same...


Layout: [25/25]

I really enjoyed the image although it was a little on the odd side, that’s what made your layout stand out. The navigation was simple, it was all on the left-hand side, very well lined, and I especially like the transparent-like table it was on. The font above the entry was great too.

Content: [0/60]

You rant, a lot it was extremely annoying to read that nothing remotely exciting happened in your day. You swear a lot, which is not good, you just sound uneducated, and I really think expanding your vocabulary and spell check would do you some justice. You really didn’t come to china doll and expect a good score did you? I mean you write like this : “How BOOOORING!!! Holidays are soooooooo boring! N e wayz...I found an article of Rupert and Dan!!!!!” I just can’t read anymore, it’s horrible content, please take my advice, it’s not meant to be a “diss” as you would so say, but it’s constructive criticism.

Errors: [3/5]

I did not like how when I clicked on your links the words would have a reflection effect, that was extremely annoying, but a personal preference so I won’t take off for that. Some Ebonics in your writing, which is the worst type of writing to have (IMHO), like “ur” as oppose to “your”. You could also use some vocabulary expansion, I think that would better your diary as far as reading goes.

Contact: [2/2]

E-mail, notes, AIM, and Guestbook.

Bonus: [3]

Rings, friends, and reviews.

Word of advice:

Change the link hover style to something more appealing, as well as using bigger more elaborate words, they’d enhance your entries content, by far. But once again this is just my opinion.

Fave. Quote:

The closest quote to being good, that I could find was this one..."SHE DIDN'T EVEN REALISED I WAS GONE TILL 9PM AND I LEFT AT 7:30PM!!!!".

Best entries:

There was no favorite of mine.

Additional comments:

Honestly, your diary bored and annoyed me. That’s all my lasting comments I have. I’d state what I said earlier, but it’d become redundant, so I’ll restrain myself from saying it again.

Will I be coming back? [0/8]

Simply put, No.

Total: [33/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer


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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.

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