
Layout: [ 22/25 ]
This is a Lissy Design done in black with the entry in the center and a small image followed by the links on the right. Overall, it’s a rather nice layout with an attractive image that perfectly matches the font color/feel/tone of the page. It’s easy to navigate and visually appealing without overwhelming the reader with useless information (as so many diary layouts are apt to do these days). With that said though, I do have to admit that there’s something about this layout that bugs me.. And after spending time reading over the entries and whatnot, I still can’t figure out what it is. I do know that something about the way things are laid out feels wrong, and I would be a much bigger fan of the layout if the image and links were on the left and the title were smaller and directly over the entry rather than off in space the way it is now..
Content: [ 56/60 ]
Your diary is overflowing with emotion. You fill people in on what’s going on in your life without making your entries boring logs of your day to day doings and all the while inject so much emotion into them that you could please even the little emo girls who run diaryrings like kissmyfist. Your diary is a perfect mixture of everything and really, I enjoyed reading it a lot.
Errors: [ 4/5 ]
I found a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing serious.
Contact: [ 2/2 ]
Email, guestbook, notes..
Bonus: [ 4 ]
Cast/reviews/links, rings, pics, 50 things..
Word of advice:
Not a thing..
Fave. Quotes:
“I carry a book with me everywhere I go, I even sleep with one under my pillow. My S.O. makes fun of me and asks me if I'm waiting for the book faery.”
“I wish I could be somebody else today. I wish I could be somebody who was easy going. Someone who could go with the flow. Somebody who feels at home wherever they lay their head. Someone who could always see the good in a bad situation. Someone, who never feels uncomfortable or out of place. I wish I could be this person, but I’m not.”
“God I think that I secretly turn into a vampire when I have my period, I have no appetite, my eyes get really sensitive to light, and I get pale as a ghost, yay.”
Best entries:
I love your 50 things page. Oh, and as far as the height thing goes.. I’m 5’3 and ½, but unlike you I haven’t come to grips with it yet so I tell everyone I’m 5’4.. and wear platform shoes all the time that make me look 5’7.. being short rocks, right? ;)
Will I be coming back? [ 6/8 ]
I‘m thinking.. Yes.
Total: [ 94/100 ]
Reviewed by: Carmela
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.