
erase & rewind, 'cause i've been changing my mind
Layout: [12/25]
This layout was made by the author of the diary. It is very very plain and boring. The background color is a dark yellow while the text is a red. The links are also red so it's very hard to distinguish one from the other one. There is no picture, not even a few boxes to separate the navigator from the entries. Not one of my favorite layouts that's for sure. I will give her points cuz the boring "previous" and "next" weren't used in this layout.
Content: [20/60]
I didn't understand the writing. There were tons of internet (and not internet) slang in a few of the entries that made me go "What is she talking about?" I did find 2 entries with conversations she's had with friends. Nothing really caught my eye with the entire diary. I usually read 10 entries, but with this one I read a lot more to see if anything would stick, but nothing. Maybe it's just me.
Errors [4/5]
When you read the entries from 2002, it shows your old layout instead of your current one. You don't seem to capitalize, but I don't take points away for that, cuz I honestly find it kinda cool, but it's not something I would do...damn those typing classes that made me do everything by the book! lol...
Contact: [1/2]
notes
Bonus: [0]
none
Word of Advice:
I'm just guessing that you have this diary for your use and your use only since you only have one form to contact you and you have no extras. You just write for youself and if anybody happens to come across your diary, so be it. But adding a couple of extras wouldn't be so bad, and a cast list, since I found a whole bunch of names and have no idea who they are. A bio wouldn't be so bad either.
Fave Quote:
"hey, i wonder if nuns are allowed to masturbate."
Best Entries:
none
Additional Comments:
Good luck with everything girl.
Will I come back?: [2/8]
No.
Total: 39/100
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.