
evilpanda- Blurry
Layout: [10/25]
I've seen this layout before. I didn't like it then, and I don't like it now. There's just so many thing wrong with this layout. I don't find it appealing to the eye. Actually, at first glance I find it scary. The links and navigation are so far away from the entry it bothers me. The green border is so think it makes the layout look like an amateur made it. I just think you could've chosen a better layout. So keep looking.
Content: [45/60]
Some of your entries are just so boring. You write about your plans and what you did and stuff. It's getting old. In this entry, you write about quotes from your previous entries. To me, it's like you didn't know what to write. You just wanted to fill up space. Well some of those quotes were really good. You should've writen more thoughts on them. It would make it more interesting. I just suggest you know what you're gonna write before you decide to make an entry.
Errors: [4/5]
I just don't like the layout.
Contact:[2/2]
It's all there.
Bonus: [5]
Yup, but they're all clutter. You should be more organized.
Favorite Quote:
"i'm constantly trying to improve myself, attempting for that impossible goal of self-perfection."
Best Entries:
This even though there wasn't much to it.
Additioinal Comments:
Write with more emotion and fix the layout.
Will I Be Coming Back: [1/8]
No, I don't think so.
Total:67/100
Reviewed by:Cindi
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.