gmk
2003-03-16 @ 11:40 a.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

let go.

Layout: [5/25]

I didn't find a link back to a designer. The main background color is black. The entries box background is a light green. There's a drop down menu. On the top is a picture of a guy pointing is finger to his brain (as if were a gun) and with the words "free yourself from yourself" I find that picture along with the words offensive. As if you agree with the thought of suicide and saying that it's alright to do that. The layout itself is pretty simple, but you just ruined your chances on getting a good score in this part cuz of that idiotic picture.

Content: [60/60]

Her writing is fabulous. She speaks her mind in a calm way. It's unbelivable how she is only still in high school and has so much stuff to talk about. She talks about her day as well as other stuff that's bothering her or is on her mind at the moment. Although her entries are fairly long, I couldn't stop reading and wanted more.

Errors [4/5]

Only a few spelling mistakes.

Contact: [2/2]

email and aim

Bonus: [4]

me, links, pics, one word

Word of Advice:

The only thing I have to say is to consider changing that picture. It's like your promoting suicide.

Fave Quote:

"I think that if my life were full of booze and jazz and sex I wouldn’t be nervous."

Best Entries:

If people would understand this entry, I am sure there would be a lot less hate on diaryland.

Additional Comments:

Good luck with everything girl!

Will I come back?: [4/8]

I would. I would even add her to my favorites since I just love her writing, but it's that picture that's bothering me. But I'll make it a point to come by from time to time. If by then she decides to change the picture cuz she's bored of it or something, then I would defently add her to my list of fave diaries.

Total: 79/100

Reviewed by: Nancy



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