
Layout: [34/35]
Extra points for being self-designed! This layout is obviously themed with Gwen Stefani because you adore her. And thats great. I love using my obsessions in my layouts, and it bugs me when reviewers take off points, just because they dont like the same person i do. The pictures of her are nice too.
Content: [32/40]
I didn't find this diary especially interesting. I think mostly, because I couldn't relate. You talked about your everyday things, and also your fears of having to enter the grown-up world. The entries were not frightfully dull, they just didnt capture me as completely entertaiing.
Errors: [5/5]
None that I spotted.
Contact: [5/5]
Guestbook, email, aim. Yay.
Bonus: [4/5]
links, cast, fans, photos. etc.
Word of advice:
Add a bit more thought-provoking or passionate entries. Your day might be interesting to you or close friends, but for an ousider peering in, I want to know more about YOU, and not where you went on July 18th.
Would I come back? [6/10]
I dont think so. Maybe if I had extra time.
Total: [86/100]
Reviewed by: Teensy
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.