i-am-tom
2003-01-19 @ 5:32 p.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

No need for your permission, all I need is your submission

Layout: [21/25]

The layout is from Poo Designs. It has this interesting shadowy picture up on top. To me, it looks like a person's arm with a knife in his hands raised in front of the full moon. The background is black while the text is a blue color with the frame around the entry being light blue. At first I couldn't see the text all that well. The cursor is an arrow with electricity around it, which turns into a hand when you hover a link, very cool! I don't like the fact that the "next" and "previous" buttons are up on top and that he used the words "last" and "next" for those links. Too many people use those already, don't you think? I do like how the link disappears when you hover it though! The layout is very simple with no distraction, other then that "Cock sucker" picture he has all the way at the bottom of the layout! lol...

Content: [60/60]

He sure has an interesting way of writing. Very dark and deep when it comes to what it seems poetry, but kinda a quirky sense of humor in his regular diary entries when I finally found some! He does seem to curse a lot, but that doesn't bother me...I mean, fuck I do it too! ~smile~ You seemed to get hooked on his writing, like you want more. You want to know what comes next.

Errors [4/5]

Your email link doesn't work. It takes me to your latest diary entry instead!

Contact: [2/2]

tag board, guestbook and email

Bonus: [3]

counter, the unique cursor, movies

Word of Advice:

I didn't see a bio page, so you might wanna try adding one. It lets everybody know who you are. That's usually the first thing I read when I review a diary.

Fave Quote:

"I just wish that I could press the shut up button on your forehead."

Best Entries:

The entire diary is just so interesting!

Additional Comments:

Good luck with everything!

Will I come back?: [8/8]

Yup...

Total: 98/100

Reviewed by: Nancy



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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.

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