Phoenix

Layout: [25/25]

This layout was made at Kikis Layouts. The background is like an olive green. She has pictures of what I'm guessing are different vinigar bottles with some links below each one of them. She then has a second navigator at the bottom, using the drop down menu. Below that is her counter. The box where the entries go are like a grey color with black text. I love how she used the words "Gyre" and "Gimble" as her "next" and "previous" entries. And her guestbook matches her diary. Good girl! Overall, this layout is simple yet unique. And I like it.

Content: [50/60]

She basically talks about her day. I was reading interested in it til like the 5th entry and all I thought was "Not again" I didn't see any emotion rather then her complaining in this entry which was pretty funny. I didn't get into her life like I thought I was, considering she is a 19 year old girl who is....I'm going to use the word chubby! ~smile~ although you use another one.

Errors [5/5]

Not a one.

Contact: [2/2]

notes, guestbook, email

Bonus: [6]

cast, about me, rings, links, reviews, counter

Word of Advice:

You never did finish your cast list. I'm not going to tell you to change how you write, cuz that's what makes you you!

Fave Quote:

"The severe-faced woman sitting next to me on the Dallas-Portland leg of the flight would wait until I had several things on my tray table and one or two more in my hands and then decide that she wanted to go to the bathroom."

Best Entries:

none.

Additional Comments:

Keep up the good work. If you need help loosing the weight cuz you said you were fat (chubby sounds more nicer! lol) let me know! Good luck with college girl!

Will I come back?: [4/8]

I might.

Total: 92/100

Reviewed by: Nancy