Incupark -

I'd like to stay a secret...

Layout: [23/25]

Pretty green layout that seems to go well with your diary. The girl looks kind of alone in this pretty forest. I like the words with it. I think it's self done too, so I am even more impressed.

Content: [59/60]

I like how the writing style is honest and it seems to be full of feeling. That in itself keeps me hooked. You sound like a non-bullshit kind of girl, so its fun to read. I really enjoyed it.

Errors: [5/5]

Good job mate.

Contact: [2/2]

Notes, aim, and gbook

Bonus: [6]

writing, weather, tests, legends, soundtrack, and reviews.

Favorite Quote:

"Greg: [scratches ass] Is Yelena jealous because I have hair on my ass and she doesn't?

Note to self: never be alone in a room with a creepy, horny, 18-year old loser ever again... "

"Basically, my generation's becoming stupid. Let's nip that in the bud,

shall we?"

Best Entries:

This one

was like one of my most favorite entries I have ever come across. Wow, I could relate so well and it was so amusing and well put!

Additional Comments:

Umm, I dont have any big advice, I pretty much like what you did with the layout. Just remeber not to get too down on yourself.

Will I Be Coming Back? [7/8]

When I find the time sure!

Total: 102/100

Reviewed by: Teensy