
jen69 - One Day I'll Fly Away...
Layout: [20/25]
This is a wonderful layout. The link color is hard to see on the image, but other than that, the layout is great. The wings are magnificent.
Content: [60/60]
Life, liberty, the pursuit of happiness, social commentary, and comments while bored make up this diary.
Errors: [3/5]
Ok, the editor in me took off one point because in some entries the beginnings of sentences are capitalized and in others, the beginnings of sentences are not. That became irritating (to me) after awhile.
The other point was for i/I capitalization.
Contact: [2/2]
Email and Guestmap
Bonus: [6]
WebRings, Quotes, Links, Hangouts, Cast, and An Introduction
Favorite Quote:
None in particular
Best Entries:
Non in particular
Additional Comments:
Some of your older entries have a different layout. The image on this layout does not show up.
Will I Be Coming Back? [3/8]
No, there is nothing of interest to me in this diary.
Total: 94/100
Reviewed by: Deartra
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.