Layout: [ 17/25 ]

very crisp, very easy to see, very.. well, boring. Okay, so not boring exactly, but stark. Not really a great expression of who you are, but it gets the job done. Which is something I suppose. But no picture? No bold use of colour? Ah, well. You did, however, use the word ‘crap’ four times in your links, so you get an extra few points for that.

Content: [ 42/60 ]

This diary just didn’t drag me in, I’m afraid. There were these little flashes of brilliance now and then that made me stop and re-read, but they were just that—flashes. I think a lot of this could be cleared up by adding some sort of biography or cast list or some sort of abstract “jester primer” where I was able to get a quick idea of what I was dealing with before I started. As it was, I found myself wondering who you were, what the places you went meant to you and who the people were in your life. When someone’s been around as long as you have (3 years! *low whistle*) it’s hard for a first-time reader to get a real scope on who you are. I mean, even after reading about 40 entries, I don’t know much about you. You don’t update very often but since you’re such an old-timer, I’ll forget about that. In addition, you post a lot of poetry which isn’t to my taste but I completely respect the guts it takes to offer up personal writing to an anonymous reader so extra points for that. Even if the poetry is all about a girl ;) but then again so many things are…

Errors: [ 45/5 ]

You're as clean as a nun's knickers.

Contact: [ 2/2 ]

Notes and Mail.

Bonus: [ 1 ]

Umm.. you have a site meter. That about does it.

Word of advice:

You refer to a *lot* of people in your day to day stories and I end up lost pretty quickly. Especially when it comes to the ‘girl’ that gets most of your attention. After 3 years, I think a summary of places/people is in order. In addition, the “u” “coz” etc. thing can really be grating on the eyes after about 20 entries. The one nice thing about it is it actually gives me an idea of what your accent sounds like.

Fave. Quotes:

“height: 172cm

weight: 60kg

waist: size 30

wallet: fat

ankle: slightly swollen

love: not found”

Best entries:

There was a little bit of insight into who you are in this entry. Even if it was through a quiz (which I did and enjoyed ;) )

Additional Comments:

I think there’s a lot to be said about you if you didn’t do as many day-to-day entries and did more short almost op-ed style pieces. Your opinions intrigue me when I see them shine through.

Will I be coming back? [ 2/8 ]

Not likely. But I will check in to see how you’re doing.

Total: [ 69/100 ]

Reviewed by: Trasker