
Layout: [34/35 ]
The layout is pink! Alot of people dont like pink- I like pink, pink is good. ::nods head:: pink is very good. Nice and neat with lovely "pretty in pink" letters at the top. Pretty good.I dont really like the links, but thats just me. I am a lazy kat! .
Content: [38/40]
The entries are pretty interesting...although they aren't all captivating, edgy entries,talking about your life/day didn't bore me, so that's good. I especially enjoyed theentries about you and Wylie, because relationships interest me. You could go from feeling depressed to happy, to back again. I didn't mind not being able to relate, because somehow
it still held my interest.
Errors: [5/5]
Nada
Contact: [5/5]
guestbook, email.
Bonus: [5/5]
profile, reviews, cast, Jill, pitas older.
Word of advice:
Some entries just get a bit boring becuase you talk like you expect us to know your life already. Your friends would get it, but to the common viewer they might get frustrated.
Fave. entries:
reviews and little shits named Jon
Additional comments:
I liked your diary for the most part, it was entertaining and thats what you need to get an audience. Keep writing! I hope all goes well with you and Jon.
Would I come back? [6/10]
Well I want to say I would come back but it'd all have to depend on if I am busy or not.
Total: [93/100]
Reviewed by: Teensy
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.