Jillica
2002-08-06 @ 6:15 p.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

Jillica----But I aint never comin' back

Layout: [34/35 ]

The layout is pink! Alot of people dont like pink- I like pink, pink is good. ::nods head:: pink is very good. Nice and neat with lovely "pretty in pink" letters at the top. Pretty good.I dont really like the links, but thats just me. I am a lazy kat! .

Content: [38/40]

The entries are pretty interesting...although they aren't all captivating, edgy entries,talking about your life/day didn't bore me, so that's good. I especially enjoyed theentries about you and Wylie, because relationships interest me. You could go from feeling depressed to happy, to back again. I didn't mind not being able to relate, because somehow

it still held my interest.

Errors: [5/5]

Nada

Contact: [5/5]

guestbook, email.

Bonus: [5/5]

profile, reviews, cast, Jill, pitas older.

Word of advice:

Some entries just get a bit boring becuase you talk like you expect us to know your life already. Your friends would get it, but to the common viewer they might get frustrated.

Fave. entries:

Jon Sucks


Stupid Stupid Stupid


reviews and little shits named Jon


Additional comments:

I liked your diary for the most part, it was entertaining and thats what you need to get an audience. Keep writing! I hope all goes well with you and Jon.

Would I come back? [6/10]

Well I want to say I would come back but it'd all have to depend on if I am busy or not.

Total: [93/100]

Reviewed by: Teensy



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