joshhartlvr
2003-02-02 @ 11:19 p.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

[[[Leesha Marie]]]

Layout: [ 24/25 ]

This is a lis design which is cute and bright. It reminds me of teddy bear and rainbow-filled dreams. And the quote is pretty cute. Overall its cute.

Content: [ 49/60 ]

Hmmm...I have a lot of mixed emotions about your diary. For one, the internet slang really gets to me. I hated how all your archives were TyPeD LiKe ThIs. I was so relieved your entire diary wasn't like that. But you did talk like those little teeny-boppers. Such as this sentence, "but y'know what?? you've been hatin on me and ashala 4 da longest and shiz and yoO know like i know that the shiz haz got 2 stop". Sometimes I just wanted to yell, "actually spell out a word for a change!" But other then these pet peeves, you showed a lot of emotion through your diary, and were open and sweet. You mainly talked about your day, but I like diaries with poetry added through out them. And you had that! So, it was a very mixed bag all in all.

Errors: [ 4/5 ]

Misspelled words.

Contact: [ 2/2 ]

notes, book, email.

Bonus: [ 4 ]

rings,cast, sites, daily reads.

Word of advice:

Um, change the archive font. It gives me a head ache.

Best entries:

I like this one.

Will I be coming back? [ 5/8 ]

Not likely, at least not all that much. Im way to busy. Maybe once in awhile though.

Total: [ 88/100 ]

Reviewed by: Teensy



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