
Layout: [ 24/25 ]
This is a lis design which is cute and bright. It reminds me of teddy bear and rainbow-filled dreams. And the quote is pretty cute. Overall its cute.
Content: [ 49/60 ]
Hmmm...I have a lot of mixed emotions about your diary. For one, the internet slang really gets to me. I hated how all your archives were TyPeD LiKe ThIs. I was so relieved your entire diary wasn't like that. But you did talk like those little teeny-boppers. Such as this sentence, "but y'know what?? you've been hatin on me and ashala 4 da longest and shiz and yoO know like i know that the shiz haz got 2 stop". Sometimes I just wanted to yell, "actually spell out a word for a change!" But other then these pet peeves, you showed a lot of emotion through your diary, and were open and sweet. You mainly talked about your day, but I like diaries with poetry added through out them. And you had that! So, it was a very mixed bag all in all.
Errors: [ 4/5 ]
Misspelled words.
Contact: [ 2/2 ]
notes, book, email.
Bonus: [ 4 ]
rings,cast, sites, daily reads.
Word of advice:
Um, change the archive font. It gives me a head ache.
Best entries:
I like this one.
Will I be coming back? [ 5/8 ]
Not likely, at least not all that much. Im way to busy. Maybe once in awhile though.
Total: [ 88/100 ]
Reviewed by: Teensy
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.