kelcsdiary
2003-01-15 @ 12:08 p.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

I know guys have feelings too, but like, who cares

Layout: [25/25]

I love the layout, it’s very seductive-like. It’s dark, but not dark enough to depress people by just looking, and not bright enough to blind me. If you can appeal to the optimist and the pessimist ( which I think your diary does well), that’s a job well done. Matter of fact this is the layout I suggested to my friend, the layout is by Generic Designs. Navigation is all on the right hand side, very accessible.

Content: [45/60]

Pretty much everyday stuff, nothing too exciting, but it wasn’t too boring either. A lot of entries revolving around boys, that was getting old after about the third entry of boys. You’re 12 years old so I’m not expecting to read anything that thought-provoking. You write and punctuate well for your age. Some more insightful entries would help boost this score, and less talk about guys, and more on yourself.

Errors: [3/5]

You have a rings link, but no rings. Also on your archives you have the month of December 2003, I think you mean 2002* Other than that everything seemed to be in working order. I love how you always remember to punctuate!

Contact: [2/2]

notes, e-mail, book

Bonus: [5]

notify list, a handy post a note thing on your diary, cast, fans, i-mood.

Word of advice:

As I said less boys, more you.

Fave. Quote:

“I ran around today telling everyone how in love I was with John Mayer. Only like 3 people knew who he was.” I got that same reaction when I used to talk about Orlando Bloom, before he was in LOTR no one knew who he was except like 3 people .

Best entries:

This one made me reminisce, I enjoyed it a lot.

Additional comments:

Your diary was “cute” and I like the fact that you’re dedicated to your diary, you’re right 300 entries is a lot.

Will I be coming back? [1/8]

I probably wont be coming back for another 4-5 years, (if you still have it then… if I’m still around, for that matter) because this boy fad will fade around then.

Total: [81/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer


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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.

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