lackoftrust
2003-01-12 @ 6:58 a.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

your disguise is not worth hiding anymore


Layout: [10/25]

Okay so I wasn’t too crazy about your layout, it was very… purple. The eyes were pretty though! Navigation was simple, it was all at the top. It’s a very simple layout by Kiki. I’m sorry but I just didn’t like it all that much, not to appealing.

Content: [54/60]

I can feel the pain when you write because you write a great deal about hurting. It’s a downer, definitely. But it’s your diary and if what you feel is sadness then it’s much better that you’re honest rather than trying to please the reader. Details are everything, and you give lots of detail into your writing and it puts my imagination in full swing. When reading your diary I literally was able to get a mental picture. The content in your diary is very thought provoking, and I enjoyed my visit.

Errors: [5/5]

None that I noticed.

Contact: [2/2]

Aim, notes, guestbook, e-mail.

Bonus: [5]

rings, cast, 101 things, my therapy, and Imood.

Word of advice:

I think a new layout may do your diary some good. Although your diary definitely speaks *you* to me, I’m sure another one could, too.

Fave. Quote:

”I felt so relieved once I said it. I'm glad he knows, now. But will he remember?”

Best entries:

This one really lightened your diary up, and I enjoyed reading it. I’ve had people do that to me before, so I’m right there with ya! =)

Additional comments:

Your diary was kind of a “drag down,” you had moments that made me want to cry, because I’ve been there before. Even though it was a depressant, I liked it because of your honesty and intense writing.

Will I be coming back? [4/8]

I’ll stop by every once and again.

Total: [80/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer


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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
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