lovelydecay
2003-01-17 @ 4:54 p.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

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Layout: [22/25]

Oh I have reviewed this layout once before, I think I said something like “I love the layout, it’s simple with meaningful words on the picture. The navigation is simple. Once again lis design has pulled another good one.” Actually that’s exactly what I said! And it still stands true to me. I think it’s only certain type of people that choose this layout, the good writers, because your layout compliments your writing. It’s kind of a downer when you see all the dark colours, but other than that, I love it.

Content: [60/60]

Thanks for submitting your diary for a review, because I honestly enjoyed it. It was very entertaining and there were moments where I felt your pain in your writing, I’ve been there, and it’s not a pleasant place. You write from your heart and you express yourself wonderfully through your words, once again thanks for submitting =)

Errors: [4/5]

On your archives page you need to put a break between “diaryland” and “e-mail”. But everything else was great including grammar.

Contact: [2/2]

e-mail & notes

Bonus: [6]

i-mood, cast, reviews, rings, surveys, “me” stuff.

Word of advice:

It seems to me like you punctuate when there is no need for it, and you’re adding commas a lot where sentences don’t need a paused. Everything else was flawless.

Fave. Quote:

”Not to say I was ever social in the first place. But I feel like everything's falling apart...everyone is too far away for me to touch, they have their own signifigant others to worry themselves with.”

Best entries:

This was tear jerking.

Additional comments:

I loved your diary! You do a fine job of capturing the reader, good job.

Will I be coming back? [6/8]

Sometime soon.

Total: [100/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer


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Little lonely girl,
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