Layout: [ 20/25 ]

This is a pretty simple black and grey design, that at first seemed pretty cool and wiity. But, after awhile you start wanting a splash of color in there or something. The writing is kind of neat though. Sometimes plain can be good.

Content: [ 50/60 ]

Your writing seem to switch off for me. At some times I will be very interested, other I will just sort of drift through mechanically. But, I suppose everyone has good and not as good entries, so this understandable. Over all I thought it was a good amount of emotion and honesty crafted. At certain times I would want to know more parts of the story your ranting about or whatever, but nothing to annoying.

Errors: [ 5/5 ]

None.

Contact: [ 2/2 ]

Email, guestbook, notes. Rightie-o.

Bonus: [ 5 ]

Rings, reviews, music/movie reviews, links, and cast.

Word of advice:

Sometimes you will say things like, "But that's not a good thing because... if you lie about this, what else have you lied to me about? I'm sorry but it makes me wonder."- you don't actually say what she lied about so I am left exasperated. So maybe, tell more of the stories.

Favourite Quotes:

"And how do the stoners and assholes always get the girls? Maybe I should become a womanizing coke-addict who has no future in the world besides living with my parents and staying home doing coke every night. I hope all of you stoners choke on your damned pot and get some coke stuck up your goddamn nose."

Best Entries:

I related tothis entry.

Additional Comments:

Overall I like the effort and tone your diary posesses. Good Job.

Will I be coming back? [ 6/8 ]

If I ever find the time...

Total: [ 88/100 ]

Reviewed by: Teensy