
Layout: [ 22/25 ]
Not sure I entirely understood the picture, but that could be because I’m aging rapidly. I enjoyed it, though. Very crisp, very clean. I would eliminate the two review links on the bottom and move them to a separate page because they detract from the uncluttered look of the diary. Very nice, though. Easy on the eyes, no crazy-ass colour schemes. Good stuff.
Content: [ 50/60 ]
I’ll let you in on a secret. I am horrible at talking/listening to people whose problems outnumber my own, especially when they’re younger than me. I tend to trivialize their issues and invoke a lot of eye-rolling. Not with you. I was pretty impressed by your insight and humour and I found myself reading as many entries of yours as I could. Even your slightly dragging day to day entries (which we’re all guilty of) were better than most because you kept them succinct and included what was important to you. You’re usually interesting, engaging and intelligent, and your entries, while not always action-packed or very level-headed completely capture what you’re thinking at the moment. Can’t say I found myself totally with you on every entry, though, as you tend towards the melodramatic. Still, well done.
Errors: [ 4/5 ]
Occasional spelling error.
Contact: [ 2/2 ]
Notes and email-- good enough for me.
Bonus: [ 4 ]
Quizzes, Cast, Different Me’s, Rings, Imood
Word of advice:
I’d say learn to stop letting the world crush you but that’s pretty lofty in its intent. So, write what you’re feeling a fuck those who say otherwise. Remember, though… it can’t rain all the time (one of my favourite movies, too).
Favourite Quotes:
holy crap, i have new shoes.
the main reason i know i could never develop a eating disorder is because i'm too lazy.
"i'm too lazy not to eat"
"i'm too lazy to go throw up..."
which is funny in a morbid way.
Best Entries:
Nothing like a short entry. Unless, of course, it’s a long, frightening entry. I’ll stop here but there’s more, I’m sure.
Will I be coming back? [ 5/8 ]
I’m torn. I’m not sure if I will, but I don’t think I want to stop checking up on how your life is progressing. I doubt this is the last you’ll see of me.
Total: [ 87/100 ]
Reviewed by: Trasker
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.