
Layout: [22/25]
I love the layout, it’s simple with meaningful words on the picture. The navigation is simple. Once again lis design has pulled another good one. I’m really digging the layout and works well with your writing, and it’s all color coordinated. It’s a bit depressing because of the colors but like I said it works well with your writing.
Content: [60/60]
You have a great way with manipulating words to your use. Every single entry I read was incredibly well written. I’d list my favorite’s here, but the whole diary is my favorite. What else is there to say? You’re gifted and your diary seconds that.
Errors: [4/5]
All your links were working, but you don’t capitalize on your about page at all that bothered me.
Contact: [2/2]
Notes, e-mail, guestbook, that’s plenty for me.
Bonus: [4]
Rings, cast, obsessions, and about.
Word of advice:
Archiving your “cast, obsessions, rings” and such would improve your “older entries” page, it’ll look a lot cleaner. Other than that, it was all good.
Fave. Quote:
”I can't do this anymore. Why look at the clock and wait to be free...when all there is ahead of you...is more of what you've just left?”
Best entries:
Truthfully all your entries were great but this one is my favorite.
Additional comments:
I loved your entire diary, it was a thought-provoking read, and I enjoyed my stay.
Will I be coming back? [8/8]
Most definitely.
Total: [100/100]
Reviewed by: Sommer
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.