Layout: [34/35 ]

Layout is self-made, extra points there!

I love Audry Hepburn, so the picture of her on top is wonderful. The layouts pretty simple other than that, but simple can be good, right? At first I was confused where the links were, because I didnt know the numbers were them, but thats just me (Im a ditz!) So no points taken off there...I really thought it went well with your diary.

Content: [39/40]

Ok, so I have no complaints here! Personally I could totally relate so I really enjoyed reading it. Your writing didnt get boring at all, it was nicely done. For some reason I really loved this paragraph, "MMmm. How I love this music. I feel like I belong in the thirties. Now all I need is a dance partner and maybe some takeout rice and sesame chicken. Come swing with me." I dont know... I just liked how you set the mood and everything :) I really feel like I got to know you, like you weren't afraid to show your emotions.

Errors: [5/5]

None, baby! Yeah! (Oh dear...to much Austin Powers for me.)

Contact: [5/5]

Notes and email. For points you only need to have two contacts, but I think it would be cool to get a guestbook...

Bonus: [5/5]

On my head phones, links, movies, photo, profile, rings. Good job, mate!

Word of advice:

Hmmm... your diary is pretty much squared away, but seeing as how I am a huge fan of drop down menus and the number links confused me I might suggest a drop down menu...but I am totally not saying you should have to do that, it is YOUR diary. Also... just a guestbook and I think thats it. Psychadelic! (uh oh, DEFINETELY too much Austin Powers...)

Fave. entries:

Im at the end of my little rope
(heartfelt and well written)

Destructive dreams (I likd this one because dreams fascinate me)

You've got the music in you (amusing)

Additional comments:

You have done a great job with your diary! I really like it. The theme, the mood you set, the writing, everything. Good work! P.s. I also like how you chose the name, "novacaine"!

Would I come back? [10/10]

Of course! I probably will even add you to my favorites!

Total: [98/100]

Reviewed by: Teensy