
Layout: [22/25]
This is a Lis Design. I gotta say, her designs are gorgeous, but I honestly gotta say that I don't like this one all that much, basically cause of the picture. The background is white with black text and black, underlined links that turn grey and crossed out when you hover them. The picture is on the left side, entries box in the middle and the navigator on the right side. She has a picture of a punk girl. "punk" and "rock" describe her "next" and "previous" entries. Over all, the layout is simple with no distractions.
Content: [55/60]
I read the last 10 entries in your diary. I hate it when you know exactly how to describe a diary, but you can't put the words down. She seems to want to get some point across through her very ordinary way of writing. Her writing seems to draw you into her world where you want to keep on reading what she has to say. Her writing is unique, it's her. But there are a few entries that I just didn't seem to understand.
Errors [4/5]
You have posted your email and aim links twice. Once under contact and once under navigation.
Contact: [2/2]
email, notes, aim, guestbook
Bonus: [6]
counter, rings, cliques, concerts, my love, reviews
Word of Advice:
Try to write about your day. Make a balance in your diary for all your dramatic and not so dramatic writings.
Fave Quote:
none
Best Entries:
This was the first entry I read and immediatly loved it. This was sure an interesting entry.
Additional Comments:
Good luck with everything girl!
Will I come back?: [2/8]
No.
Total: 91/100
Reviewed by: Nancy
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.