
orgasmicstud - Tell Me A Fable
Layout: [10/25]
This is a Diaryland layout.
Content: [65/60]
This young man talks about love, life, school, and his friends. He talks about the many girls he hangs around with, how he feels about them, and how he feels about the people the girls hang around with. Most of the girls he hangs around with go to school with him.
Errors: [5/5]
No errors were found.
Contact: [1/2]
Bonus: [0]
There are no bonus items.
Favorite Quote:
"This song rocks my boat like there ain't no anchor."
Best Entries:
None stood out to me.
Additional Comments:
I would suggest changing your layout a little.
I also suggest that you archive your older entries by year. The archive page is very long. It would be easier to navigate if you had the pages archived by year.
Will I Be Coming Back? [4/8]
It is interesting reading, but I wouldn't come back too often.
Total: 75/100
Reviewed by: Deartra
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.