Layout: [12/25]

Truthfully your layout lacked style and material; it just didn’t stand out to me at all. The picture was pretty, but that’s all I liked. The links were off centered, but you didn’t make the layout he/she did. But you’re the one that picked that layout. Grant it that it’s your diary, and do as you will.

Content: [40/60]

Your entries did show a little of emotion, and let me look into your life but in a very abstract way, I didn’t feel like I connected with you, and your diary was almost putting me to sleep. You are fifteen though, so for your age you write okay. Also you seem like the average teeny-bopper but trying to façade your image by such a dark layout and sometimes the use of words that it seems you wouldn’t understand without the help of a dictionary.

Errors: [3/5]

Your spelling and punctuation could use some work, and the use of the word “kinda” can irk a person. But you don’t speak in Ebonics or TyPe LiKe So. So I’ll go easy on you.

Contact: [2/2]

Guestbook and email, do you have a thing against notes? I won’t take anything off because you have at least two ways for me to get in touch with you =).

Bonus: [4]

Links, rings, reviews, and 100 things.

Word of advice:

Open yourself up more and expand your vocabulary, you’ll be amazed at what it can do for you.

Fave. Quote:

“ i feel like my heart is empty and i want to cry but i can't get it out, i feel empty”

Best entries:

None really.

Additional comments:

Everything that I have said in this review is constructive criticism; I don’t want you to feel like I am picking on you, because I’m not.

Will I be coming back? [0/8]

No your diary was not captivating enough.

Total: [61/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer