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2003-01-28 @ 3:17 a.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

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Layout: [25/25]

Oh, the ever infamous Alex, was it coincidence I got your diary or was it requested? Hehe. I must say this is my favorite layout of all the ones you’ve had, It’s simple and neat, just the way I like it. The “punk look” definitely suits you and your writing well, you couldn’t have chosen a better layout! Good job! Layout credited to the rat.

Content: [53/60]

You seem very passionate when you write, you’re always complimenting others and praising people. I really like that you’re not so self-absorbed, like a lot of diaries I’ve read in the past. Your diary is like a breath of fresh air, I truly enjoyed it, and learning more about you as an individual, because you are quite the individual, and I have great respect for people who aren’t an average lemming. The only thing I didn’t like were some of your entries were very short, but it’s understandable, after all if you have nothing to write about, how can it be long? I also think you should write a bit more about yourself and not so much about everyone else, I’d enjoy reading more about you, since it is *your* diary.

Errors: [3/5]

You have some minor spelling errors, but nothing drastic. Everything else was in it’s working order.

Contact: [2/2]

Guestbook, and e-mail.

Bonus: [3]

Your guestbook is kick ass, major bonus. You link cr *yay* and you have a cast.

Word of advice:

Keep this layout, it’s gold. And like I said before… you should write a bit more about yourself and not so much about everyone else, I’d enjoy reading more about you, since it is *your* diary.

Fave. Quote:

”I'm 13 year old guy with nothing to do except play with fire and write in this diary. I love my Adidas hoodie. Nothing can beat my Adidas hoodie.” Lol, it’s the little things in life right?!

Best entries:

I like the sheer simplicity of this

Additional comments:

You have a good diary here =0)

Will I be coming back? [8/8]

Absolutely.

Total: [94/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer


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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.

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