rash - My DiaryLand Diary
Layout: [10/25]
I did not like this layout at all. It is cluttered and could be tweaked a little. I suggest putting all of the links on one side and then putting the Tag Board and other stuff on the other side. Also, make the font for your links a little smaller so that they do not break into two lines. This will make the links easier to understand. Several of the links on your archive page are messed up and inaccessible.
Content: [55/60]
Life, friends, family, and more.
Errors: [1/5]
The use of multiple periods is overdone.........., spelling errors, spacing errors, the links on your archive page do not work.
Contact: [2/2]
Email and guestbook
Bonus: [6]
Message board, Guestmap, cast, biography, weather info, personality tests, pictures, and more.
Favorite Quote:
None
Best Entries:
None
Additional Comments:
Is a pop-up window supposed to pop up when you go to the archive page?
Will I Be Coming Back? [1/8]
No. I don't have much in common with the author of the diary.
Total: 75/100
Reviewed by: Deartra
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.