riotxgirl
2003-01-16 @ 12:06 a.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

but everyday's the same

Layout: [22/25]

Oooo, I like the layout it’s cute and simple, but not boring, like most simple layouts. I really like this one, it has enough color to catch my eye, but not blind me. Your picture was a bit small and I wasn’t able to really make the picture out. But everything else was great and the links were easy to get to, very well navigation.

Content: [35/60]

Mainly about boys and school, the typical teenage everyday stuff, nothing too exciting. And I don’t like how most of the time you substitute your curse words like “effing” instead of fucking. It just seems pretty 'G' plastered. But your punctuation is exceptional and so is your random use for words.

Errors: [4/5]

You didn’t have your “next” and “previous” button it was kind of a pain in the ass to keep clicking on archives.

Contact: [2/2]

Guestbook and e-mail, that’s plenty!

Bonus: [2]

I-mood and FTJ.

Word of advice:

”Next” and “previous” buttons would make your diary better along with more insightful content. Maybe more of what you are feeling as oppose to what you did, that really doesn’t show much emotion. And archiving some of your older entries would make your archives look better, along with making them viewable without a hover.

Fave. Quote:

”hahahahahah jill called me a bitch in volley ball today. i think it's so funny. i love how she hates me for no reason it's great.” Yeah I think it’s great when that happens to me too… pointless… but rather funny.

Best entries:

I wish I had a voice.

Additional comments:

If you’re upset about your score you can always resubmit in two weeks.

Will I be coming back? [1/8]

Nope, not any time soon anyhow.

Total: [66/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer


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Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
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