Layout: [25/35]

This is an original Starwars layout designed for you by MK Design. I spent quite some time trying to figure out whether or not I like it, and I’m honestly still undecided. On one hand, it’s well laid out, simple, neat and easy to navigate which are all qualities I look for in a layout. On the other hand lies the color scheme. I don’t like red and green together. They might work well during Christmas, but the rest of the year they just don’t look right together. I also don’t like the neon green outline around Yoda. It’s a bit of an overkill. Still, it’s your layout and you seem to be happy with it so don’t mind me.

Content: [30/40]

Some of your entries evoked feeling of nostalgia and made me reflect on my high school days. Your personality really comes through in your writing and sometimes you drew me into an entry or two. Overall though, you didn’t keep my attention. I think this is due to the lack of emotion you show. A lot of your entries seem superficial in that you’ll touch upon a subject and then move on without exploring it. I think you have potential that you’re not quite living up to.

Errors: [5/5]

Good job on this one, I couldn’t find any!

Contact: [5/5]

e-mail, notes, aim, guestbook. You’re easy to get in touch with.

Bonus: [5/5]

You have several rings pages as well as a link to a Starwars page. I would however like to see a bio page.

Word of advice:

Try putting some more emotion in your entries. You’ll start to talk about your feeling and then cut it off. For instance, you said that Vic kinda hurt you but didn’t go into any detail with it. Why do you think you deserved it? I’d be interested in reading that.

Fave. entries:

You started to show some of the emotion I’m talking about in this one.
And this one brought back fond thoughts of my first day of high school.

Would I come back? [6/10]

I don’t think so. It’s nothing personal, you just didn’t capture my attention.

Total: [76/100]

Reviewed by: Carmela