slayne
2003-02-06 @ 9:52 p.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

[.mirror.mirror.] - [.dont.you.lie.] - [.mirror.mirror.] - [.hope.to.die.]

Layout: [20/25]

Layout seems to be a self designed one. The background is blakc with white text with like a greyish color the the links. It has a picture of what seems to be a girl and some writing slashed across the same picture. The navigator is just below the picture and the entries are on the right side of the picture. This layout although pretty simple, seems pretty depressing and not my style. "yesterdays' girl" and "tomorrow's anew" describe her "next" and "previous" links. It also has an invisible scroll bar, which I dislike.

Content: [52/60]

The daily events of what seems to be a kinda depressed and insecure 15 year old. I hate reading diaries like this where the author does something that's wrong to hurt herself and yet, I'm sure knows it's wrong. I found her entries sort of interesting, yet I was just anxious to knock some sense into her. She does write with an umph, which is good.

Errors [5/5]

Didn't find any.

Contact: [2/2]

email, notes, guestbook

Bonus: [1]

about.

Word of Advice:

Maybe you should add some more features to your diary like a cast page, or quizzes your taken or just some other links.

Fave Quote:

none.

Best Entries:

This one made me laugh....just 2 simple words....but for all those of you who don't know what I'm talking about, just check the entry before that one!

Additional Comments:

Good luck with everything girl and try not to cut yourself or drink pills that your not supose to. It's just not right. I'm positive you know that your hurting yourself, and if you can't see it now, then you'll realize it in the future, when maybe it'll be too late.

Will I come back?: [2/8]

No.

Total: 82/100

Reviewed by: Nan cy



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