soulflavor
2003-01-19 @ 11:26 a.m.

Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

alone.

Layout: [18/25]

I like the layout it’s got the dramatic look. The dull colors sit well with the photo. Your font was extremely small and hard to read, I did not like that at all. I would’ve enjoyed it a lot more had your font size not been -2.

Content: [50/60]

You come across a very depressed and angry person, not a force to be reckoned with, and your writing clearly states that. You have a lot of pain in your writing, and you’re not afraid to show it. You’re very blunt/straight-forward and I love every entry of it. Although it didn’t put off very good vibes. I still enjoyed reading your thoughts.

Errors: [5/5]

As far as I can see, there is none.

Contact: [2/2]

AIM, book, mail.

Bonus: [4]

i-mood, bio, lyrics, and you linked us on your main page, good going!

Word of advice:

My advice would be to make your font size bigger, it really is straining on the eyes, if you have less than perfect vision.

Fave. Quote:

”I asked him why I'm never good enough anymore. What's wrong with me? What did I ever do wrong? Why don't you love me anymore? I kept saying, "I don't understand, I don't understand"”, I’ve been there and I know how you felt. I definitely related.

Best entries:

You have some odd dreams, I liked reading it!

Additional comments:

You sound like a bit of a loose cannon. Especially here. Did you ever think that maybe he doesn’t want to be with you cause you act like a psycho at moments? You have your bouts if your diary holds true, maybe you should seek help, and I don’t mean Jenny Jones help. (okay that sounded mean, I apologize) Just remember once you go, there is no coming back, think before you act hun!

Will I be coming back? [8/8]

Yes, you made me worry now.

Total: [87/100]



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Little lonely girl,
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