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So Much For Happily Ever After...

Layout: [23/25]

Do my eyes fail me or is that Miss Kelly Clarkson?! I happen to like her singing. I like how use every shade of purple in the image, it is a bit too purple, but not eye-straining purple! I also like how you have your diary url in the image, very clever. Navigation is pretty simple, three different drop down menus, my favorite being the “reviewers” one of course! I really enjoyed this layout I’m assuming it’s self designed seeing as how there is no link to a designer, so great job.

Content: [40/60]

I have to admit, after reading your diary I thought I was reviewing an average teenager who likes to talk about boys and every day rants, I was disappointed to find out your real age… 23. I had hoped that with age comes wisdom, or at least advanced writing skills, none of which I was reading. You don’t write with enough feeling, you don’t seem like you take yourself seriously, which is fine if that’s what you’re going for, but it’d be nice to read something a little bit more intriguing. On a lighter note, your diary was a good laugh and definitely “interesting”, you just seem passionless when you write. But I’m glad to see that your writing style has progressed since your first entry. And I think with a bit more feeling in your writing you’ll be doing well, if I want to read something to make me laugh I’ll just come and read about your rants, because you write about some funny things.

Errors: [5/5]

None to the naked eye.

Contact: [2/2]

You have every form of contact I can think of. The whole two points that’s worth!

Bonus: [6]

Sparkle-fae bllinky, that’s cute. You also have an I-mood of sorts, reviews, bio, cast, thing you “<3”,

Word of advice:

If I state this again it’ll just become redundant, so I won’t.

Fave. Quote:

”The expensive drugs are a gift from the doctors. If only the powers would gift us with a break in life, or some cash, or some help somewhere. I've been in a Dixie Chicks mood for weeks. “ It was funny even though I have no idea what is a “Dixie chick mood” is

Best entries:

It’s addictive.

Additional comments:

Light-hearted and comical.

Will I be coming back? [3/8]

There’s a slight chance. The question, “Will I be welcomed back?”

Total: [79/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer