Layout: [ 18/25 ]

This is a Lisdesign done in pink with an image at the top, followed by a series of text boxes including everything and anything. Literally. Overall, it‘s a nice base for a layout, but I have to admit that I don‘t really like it. And it‘s not because I have something against the color pink either. It just looks cluttered and messy.. which is hard to accomplish with such a neat base.

Content: [ 50/60 ]

Your diary is mostly filled with the usual day to day events. But unlike most others, it reads more like a personal journal than an online diary. You seem to write almost solely for yourself and I really like that. It’s what a lot of other Diarylanders want to do, but just can’t really pull off. Maybe you’re just really open, or maybe you’re just come to terms with you who are [which if you have, makes you so far ahead of your years].. Either way, I hope you don’t change a thing.

Errors: [ 2/5 ]

You have several images/links that don’t work. On your main page, your quiz page, your older page, your review page..

Contact: [ 2/2 ]

Notes, guestbook, email..

Bonus: [ 4 ]

Cast, links, quizzes, reviews..

Word of advice:

I think you just tried to squeeze in too much information on the main layout and frankly, it‘s a little overwhelming. My advice would be to make your layout a little more simple. The way it is now, all the extras take away from your entry, which really, is why people come to your page in the first place. Your older page though, is laid out nicely. If you used that as your main layout I would have thought it was great.

Additional Comments:

Your title is wonderful..

Will I be coming back? [ 4/8 ]

I doubt it. I just don‘t have a lot of time to spend online these days and your diary, though good, just didn‘t spark an interest in me to follow your day to day doings.

Total: [ 80/100 ]

Reviewed by: Carmela