
this-is-me36- Angel Deserve to Die
Layout: [24/25]
I love this layout. It suits you. I deducted points because it's sometimes hard to read the entries, well for me at least.
Content: [50/60]
Um.. you write pretty well. Actually, you write very well. The problem is that I'm not too fond of it. I get bored after a while. You like to talk about your everyday problems and stuff. It doesn't catch my attentions.
Errors: [5/5]
Pretty good.
Contact:[2/2]
I see them, and you've got AIM. Wow!
Bonus: [3]
Reviews, profile, fans.
Favorite Quote:
"Confusion can kill the mind and soul, While we get concoured by our stupidity"-anonomus
Best Entries:
They're all pretty good. I just can't choose.
Additioinal Comments:
You could try talking about more interesting stuff. No offense, I'm sure you have an interesting life, but I've yet to see that in your writing.
Will I Be Coming Back: [1/8]
No, I'm just not interesting. Sorry.
Total:85/100
Reviewed by:Cindi
Little china doll,
sits up on the shelf.
Mama's china doll,
so pretty by herself
Little lonely girl,
always does what's best.
Mama's little girl,
in a pink and white lace dress.
Little china doll,
never laughs or cries.
Little lonely girl,
sits alone and sighs.