Not taking any new requests for awhile, we apoligize. Come back after March.

just my fucking luck.
Layout: [15/25]

Well your layout screamed Sheryl Crow to me, because of the words “everyday is a winding road”. Now I have that really annoying song in my head. I have to admit I didn’t like your layout much, not just because of who it reminded me of, but because it was too… well, Grey. Nothing stood out to me. However I did like how easy it was to navigate. And how your diary name was in the table.

Content: [35/60]

You tend to rant and complain a lot, which is pretty much the same thing. I wasn’t too into your writing, after about the 8th entry I was ready to shoot “Dave” you speak of him so much, it got really redundant. I really think your writing would improve if you got in more depths with your feelings, and complained in more of a nonchalant way.

Errors: [3/5]

You don’t capitalize where you should, and you make some minor spelling errors.

Contact: [2/2]

AIM, e-mail, guestbook, and you have AOL too.

Bonus: [6]

at the moment, answers, cast, bio, reviews, rings.

Word of advice:

I think a more eye appealing layout will do your diary some significant justice, as well as spell check before you post your entry.

Fave. Quote:

”i want to move out. do something with myself. get out of here. gah. i'm so done with this.” We all feel this way at least once in our lives.

Best entries:

This was ludicrous (the SUV part).

Additional comments:

You are probably not happy with your score, but please don’t take this to heart, as I tell everyone I review, everything I’ve said has been constructive criticism. Also, keep in mind that you asked for a review.

Will I be coming back? [0/8]

No.

Total: [61/100]

Reviewed by: Sommer