Layout: [ 22/25 ]

This is a self designed layout done in black with the image of a sunset at the top, the links lined up on the left and the entry on the right. It‘s simple yet attractive and I feel it fits your writing quite well. I do however think that it might look better if you put your entry in a text box with a scroll bar (rather than having the background scroll) and brought your links down and over a bit.

Content: [ 48/60 ]

You tend to spend a lot of time writing about your day to day events, how swim practice went, what you got on a quiz, etc. This makes for somewhat tedious reading. Luckily, you speak from the heart and put a lot of feeling into your entries which makes up for it. Your writing seems to be very open and honest, still I can‘t help but feel that you‘re holding back somehow. I can‘t quite put my finger on what gave me that feeling, but it‘s still there.

Errors: [ 5/5 ]

I couldn‘t find a single one.

Contact: [ 2/2 ]

Email, guestbook, notes..

Bonus: [ 4 ]

About, bio, hardly, links..

Word of advice:

Nothing other than the layout changes I already suggested.

Fave. Quotes:

"I woke up listening to the rain and I hope I can fall asleep to the sound as well."

Best entries:

This one and this one.

Will I be coming back? [ 4/8 ]

I doubt it. Frankly, your diary is depressing.

Total: [ 85/100 ]

Reviewed by: Carmela